Author Topic: The ProtoType Avenger  (Read 65871 times)

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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #15 on: August 24, 2006, 08:13:07 am »
Anyway, im gonna REpost 9 and 10 for fyber on todays update.

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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #16 on: August 25, 2006, 09:52:09 am »
Heres #11 for todays update Fyber.


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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #17 on: August 25, 2006, 02:29:32 pm »
Nice going on the layout, it fits perdy good now!

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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #18 on: August 25, 2006, 10:55:55 pm »
Heres, #12

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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #19 on: August 27, 2006, 09:24:29 am »
Here is #13

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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #20 on: August 27, 2006, 12:27:54 pm »
Anyone else notice that blue guy sneaking around all four panels?
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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #21 on: August 27, 2006, 04:27:19 pm »
Its Megaman

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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #22 on: August 27, 2006, 06:48:45 pm »
NO ITS THAT GUY FROM WAYNE'S WORLD

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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #23 on: August 27, 2006, 07:17:37 pm »
I spy with my little eye... 4 typos.
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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #24 on: August 27, 2006, 08:45:11 pm »
Well, I spy more than 4. I thinks I'll just help out a little and fix it all.

Panel 1: Tell me something. How did you get a hold of these files?
Panel 2: From his lab. See, I'm one of his robots, so I get to run around all day. Sometimes I take a sneak peek at some of his newest creations.
Panel 3: What's odd is that I never even saw Dr. Wily build those robots.
Panel 4: That's because he stole them from me.

Even with all the "misstatements" fixed, the comic is still full of inconstistencies and errors.

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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #25 on: August 28, 2006, 01:19:39 am »
While the other corrections are true, how do you figure "ahold" should be "a hold"?  I looked it up in dictionary dot corn to make sure I wasn't just some dumb hick using a word wrong, but it seems to corroborate the usage here, unless there's some grammatical thing I'm missing.

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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #26 on: August 28, 2006, 06:49:04 am »
:P well, I have an idea on how to stop the mistakes, i'll probably make the text bright green to actaully see what im writing then make it black then into a word bubble.

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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #27 on: August 28, 2006, 07:53:16 am »
While the other corrections are true, how do you figure "ahold" should be "a hold"?  I looked it up in dictionary dot corn to make sure I wasn't just some dumb hick using a word wrong, but it seems to corroborate the usage here, unless there's some grammatical thing I'm missing.

I just always read it as "a hold" in books and magazines but i guess whatever works, works.

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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #28 on: August 28, 2006, 08:04:15 am »
#14 is here.

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Re: The ProtoType Avengers
« Reply #29 on: August 29, 2006, 08:09:54 am »
#15

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