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Title: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on August 22, 2006, 08:08:25 pm
1#: Energy Core Techno Babble

Its a little cheesy and has a few speling mistakes. But hey, Its my first one.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 22, 2006, 08:10:25 pm
#2: Running Away

Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 22, 2006, 08:11:03 pm
#3: Computer Games
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 22, 2006, 08:11:55 pm
#4: Item Builder 2.0

Yeah, I know the arrow is bad, my shape tool on photoshop was missing for some reason.

Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 22, 2006, 08:12:39 pm
#5: A small plasma blast.

I originally wwanted to say "Shiiiiiiiiit!"
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 22, 2006, 08:13:12 pm
#6: Go Back!

Crap, spelled something wrong in the fourth panel.  >:(
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: ahnna on August 22, 2006, 09:05:20 pm
wow nice comic
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 23, 2006, 09:58:30 am
Thanks =D

#7: World Domination
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: FyberOptic on August 23, 2006, 10:39:57 am
Comic uppu.

Like I mentioned in the newspost, they look a bit squarshed in the comic software since IE and Firefox are dumb and don't resize images in a nice way, and while for most other people I'd suggest they switch to like a 2x2 layout, I just don't think yours would be suited to that.  A horizontal scrollbar inside the comic viewer would even work fine for yours, and does when I set it up to do that, but it doesn't work in IE; it just stretches out the page.  X_x.  I'll figger something out.

In the meantime, feel free to keep posting'em here for me to grab, or email'em to me at fyber@fybertech.com or fyberoptic@gmail.com or whatever you wanna do.  It's all good.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 23, 2006, 10:50:07 am
I'll just keep posting them for you to put up. My e-mailer doesnt let me send files.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 23, 2006, 03:53:46 pm
#8
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Sean on August 23, 2006, 04:01:02 pm
*Pokes Mr. Gray Dude* Polka? Reminds of MS Paint Masterpieces. In fact, it looks just like Blues' early sprites in said comic.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 23, 2006, 05:12:08 pm
#9:

You can put this one up tommarrow Fyber. I just made them ahead of time.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: MDude on August 23, 2006, 08:49:29 pm
Please, cousin It couldn't teaar him apart, he's just a bunch of hair!
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Prox on August 23, 2006, 11:10:42 pm
He told me that the only reason he has the hair is so he can hide corn dogs in it.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 24, 2006, 08:13:07 am
Anyway, im gonna REpost 9 and 10 for fyber on todays update.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 25, 2006, 09:52:09 am
Heres #11 for todays update Fyber.

Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: FyberOptic on August 25, 2006, 02:29:32 pm
Nice going on the layout, it fits perdy good now!
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 25, 2006, 10:55:55 pm
Heres, #12
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 27, 2006, 09:24:29 am
Here is #13
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Altzan on August 27, 2006, 12:27:54 pm
Anyone else notice that blue guy sneaking around all four panels?
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Shadow on August 27, 2006, 04:27:19 pm
Its Megaman
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Prox on August 27, 2006, 06:48:45 pm
NO ITS THAT GUY FROM WAYNE'S WORLD
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Armchair on August 27, 2006, 07:17:37 pm
I spy with my little eye... 4 typos.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Prox on August 27, 2006, 08:45:11 pm
Well, I spy more than 4. I thinks I'll just help out a little and fix it all.

Panel 1: Tell me something. How did you get a hold of these files?
Panel 2: From his lab. See, I'm one of his robots, so I get to run around all day. Sometimes I take a sneak peek at some of his newest creations.
Panel 3: What's odd is that I never even saw Dr. Wily build those robots.
Panel 4: That's because he stole them from me.

Even with all the "misstatements" fixed, the comic is still full of inconstistencies and errors.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: FyberOptic on August 28, 2006, 01:19:39 am
While the other corrections are true, how do you figure "ahold" should be "a hold"?  I looked it up in dictionary dot corn to make sure I wasn't just some dumb hick using a word wrong, but it seems to corroborate the usage here, unless there's some grammatical thing I'm missing.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 28, 2006, 06:49:04 am
:P well, I have an idea on how to stop the mistakes, i'll probably make the text bright green to actaully see what im writing then make it black then into a word bubble.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Prox on August 28, 2006, 07:53:16 am
While the other corrections are true, how do you figure "ahold" should be "a hold"?  I looked it up in dictionary dot corn to make sure I wasn't just some dumb hick using a word wrong, but it seems to corroborate the usage here, unless there's some grammatical thing I'm missing.

I just always read it as "a hold" in books and magazines but i guess whatever works, works.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 28, 2006, 08:04:15 am
#14 is here.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 29, 2006, 08:09:54 am
#15

Sweet a bed! You never see those anymore!
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Armchair on August 29, 2006, 04:29:27 pm
Make him bust his robot skull on the ceiling.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 30, 2006, 07:02:48 am
#16
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Altzan on August 30, 2006, 01:00:08 pm
Do I really want to know what's in there?  :o
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on August 31, 2006, 02:24:42 pm
#17
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on September 01, 2006, 10:04:03 pm
Heres #18
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Altzan on September 02, 2006, 09:11:57 am
Sweet, animation!
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: FyberOptic on September 02, 2006, 04:31:24 pm
He's going for the big times.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on September 03, 2006, 09:51:47 pm
Sorry for the lack of updates, been busy. I should have 3 updates for tommarrow, if I dont put 3 up tommarrow you can be sure there will be 4 for tuesday.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: FyberOptic on September 03, 2006, 10:33:10 pm
It's fine if you miss the weekend.  Hell it's fine if you miss a day during the week if you get busy.  But it's cool if you wanna make a few to catch up.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Boris on September 03, 2006, 10:36:04 pm
Hell, this is fybertech, stick to whatever scheduel makes you happy, we're fine either way.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on September 06, 2006, 05:49:40 pm
Heres #19
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on September 06, 2006, 07:49:30 pm
Double update! #20
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Altzan on September 06, 2006, 08:23:19 pm
Wow Rhythm, your comics are really good. It's neat how you can make them unique with animations, sprite editing, and unique storyline. And it's an added bonus how it's pure, with no profanity or bad scenes (except maybe for 16 but I dunno). Keep up the good work.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on September 07, 2006, 02:24:19 pm
#21
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Sean on September 07, 2006, 03:37:41 pm
Just had to make this.

(http://img394.imageshack.us/img394/4692/catly9.png)

EDIT: HARDLY THINK! HARDLY THINK! God, me and my errors.. Oh well.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on September 10, 2006, 12:04:33 pm
#22
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on September 11, 2006, 07:03:15 pm
#23 and #24

Come on! You can't tell me you thought there wouldnt be a cameo in here at some point, right?

I'll fix #24 if its not okay.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Armchair on September 11, 2006, 08:58:29 pm
Well, Ryhtme. I don't think Fyber was ever in that business, and if he was it would be in his Labs suit. I think. I DUNNO.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on September 14, 2006, 06:21:15 pm
Heres #25
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on September 15, 2006, 09:07:14 pm
Okay Folks! Its time for some action! #26 is here!
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avengers
Post by: Red_Raven on September 16, 2006, 07:30:57 am
Heres #27!
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on September 16, 2006, 07:58:56 am
And #28
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Armchair on September 16, 2006, 03:08:00 pm
I'm suprised by the action, nice job.

In #28 I would have used "Live Wire" instead of hot wire and used the bullets instead of a lazz0r.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on September 17, 2006, 09:14:00 am
Heres #29 and #30
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on September 18, 2006, 05:54:47 pm
Heres #31 Sick and all I still have an update for you people!
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on September 20, 2006, 07:06:42 pm
#32
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Earthquake on September 21, 2006, 08:06:46 pm
#32
I'm really starting to like these comics!!!!!
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Buzzard on September 22, 2006, 10:34:24 pm
Didn't we kick you out or something?
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on September 29, 2006, 05:36:16 pm
There might actualy be some updates this weekend. WTF
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Armchair on October 01, 2006, 04:53:48 pm
Wendsdgaendy, Thursday, Friday?
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on October 13, 2006, 01:43:50 pm
im gonna try to put up some updates soon, because next weeked ill be in virginia till wensday.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on October 25, 2006, 08:35:05 pm
Well, im back from virginia. But cant use my computer because of shit grades. So ill be back when im ungrounded. lol
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: FyberOptic on October 26, 2006, 12:18:45 am
I thought you said "underground" for a second, and became disappointed to see you weren't actually coming online from some secret underground location.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on November 04, 2006, 10:47:10 pm
Finally an update!
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on November 21, 2006, 07:34:21 pm
#34 is here!
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on November 22, 2006, 06:16:29 pm
Right now im working on a background for number 35. If your lucky ill have it done and a comic made some time tonight. There will be a Thanksgiving comic for tommarrow though.
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on November 23, 2006, 09:31:56 pm
Thanksgiving Episode!
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: ahnna on November 23, 2006, 10:24:14 pm
Happy Thanksgiving
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on November 24, 2006, 09:32:30 pm
#35
Title: Re: The ProtoType Avenger
Post by: Red_Raven on December 17, 2006, 01:02:21 pm
#36 is finally done. Now you know what took so long for an update.