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Red_Raven
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« Reply #15 on: August 24, 2006, 08:13:07 AM »

Anyway, im gonna REpost 9 and 10 for fyber on todays update.


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« Reply #16 on: August 25, 2006, 09:52:09 AM »

Heres #11 for todays update Fyber.



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« Reply #17 on: August 25, 2006, 02:29:32 PM »

Nice going on the layout, it fits perdy good now!
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« Reply #18 on: August 25, 2006, 10:55:55 PM »

Heres, #12


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« Reply #19 on: August 27, 2006, 09:24:29 AM »

Here is #13


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« Reply #20 on: August 27, 2006, 12:27:54 PM »

Anyone else notice that blue guy sneaking around all four panels?
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Gonna need more rope.


« Reply #21 on: August 27, 2006, 04:27:19 PM »

Its Megaman
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« Reply #22 on: August 27, 2006, 06:48:45 PM »

NO ITS THAT GUY FROM WAYNE'S WORLD
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Sup Mr. Human Nega-Duck


« Reply #23 on: August 27, 2006, 07:17:37 PM »

I spy with my little eye... 4 typos.
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« Reply #24 on: August 27, 2006, 08:45:11 PM »

Well, I spy more than 4. I thinks I'll just help out a little and fix it all.

Panel 1: Tell me something. How did you get a hold of these files?
Panel 2: From his lab. See, I'm one of his robots, so I get to run around all day. Sometimes I take a sneak peek at some of his newest creations.
Panel 3: What's odd is that I never even saw Dr. Wily build those robots.
Panel 4: That's because he stole them from me.

Even with all the "misstatements" fixed, the comic is still full of inconstistencies and errors.
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« Reply #25 on: August 28, 2006, 01:19:39 AM »

While the other corrections are true, how do you figure "ahold" should be "a hold"?  I looked it up in dictionary dot corn to make sure I wasn't just some dumb hick using a word wrong, but it seems to corroborate the usage here, unless there's some grammatical thing I'm missing.
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Red_Raven
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« Reply #26 on: August 28, 2006, 06:49:04 AM »

Tongue well, I have an idea on how to stop the mistakes, i'll probably make the text bright green to actaully see what im writing then make it black then into a word bubble.
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« Reply #27 on: August 28, 2006, 07:53:16 AM »

While the other corrections are true, how do you figure "ahold" should be "a hold"?  I looked it up in dictionary dot corn to make sure I wasn't just some dumb hick using a word wrong, but it seems to corroborate the usage here, unless there's some grammatical thing I'm missing.

I just always read it as "a hold" in books and magazines but i guess whatever works, works.
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« Reply #28 on: August 28, 2006, 08:04:15 AM »

#14 is here.


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« Reply #29 on: August 29, 2006, 08:09:54 AM »

#15

Sweet a bed! You never see those anymore!


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