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Title: Mysto Comics
Post by: Red_Raven on December 11, 2005, 09:16:10 am
shit a spelling mistke
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Red_Raven on December 11, 2005, 01:58:36 pm
Heres 2#
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Shadow on December 11, 2005, 03:34:29 pm
So far so good
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Joefus on December 11, 2005, 03:36:01 pm
Oh that Ecto is such a sneaky piece of ectoplasm.  Also why does Mysto's mouth not open when he talks?
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Red_Raven on December 11, 2005, 03:36:59 pm
Because it doesnt open, its like that on perpose.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Buzzard on December 11, 2005, 04:19:20 pm
such scrolling texts
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Bluejay on December 11, 2005, 04:44:07 pm
Such unecessary
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Vito on December 11, 2005, 04:51:45 pm
spell and grammar check
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Red_Raven on December 11, 2005, 04:54:51 pm
I noticed vito, plus heres 3
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Vito on December 11, 2005, 05:04:04 pm
If you've noticed, then why don't you fix it?
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Armchair on December 11, 2005, 08:17:09 pm
I don't like it.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Red_Raven on December 11, 2005, 08:19:00 pm
Never said you had too.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Prox on December 11, 2005, 08:55:29 pm
Normally, when one makes a webcomic, they make it with the intent of people liking it. Unless the objective of the comic is to make people hate it, in which case the comic sucks.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Red_Raven on December 11, 2005, 09:18:59 pm
Yeah, but dont forget to, im a beginner with the comic making thing plus were only in to 3 episodes.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Prox on December 11, 2005, 10:05:49 pm
That doesn't explain why you want people to dislike your comic.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Ciono on December 11, 2005, 10:11:08 pm
Y'know, I'd love to be able to sit around listening to music for a couple of hours uninterrupted.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Red_Raven on December 12, 2005, 10:58:48 am
*Pulls hand over face* I didnt say I want people to dislke my comic. Im saying people are entitled to thier opinions.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: ecto on December 12, 2005, 02:10:48 pm
I just don't see a whole lot of thought behind it.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Vito on December 12, 2005, 02:37:15 pm
I think the main problem behind the comic is that it doesn't really seem to have a story, or make much sense. It all seems to just be about you just wanting to make a comic.
I suggest you go read this: http://www.fragile-minds.com/crashnbass/donts.html
It's sort of the ten commandments of sprite comics, and it's actually really rather good.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Bluejay on December 12, 2005, 04:31:24 pm
Is glad this comic takes negative attention away from my own
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: ecto on December 12, 2005, 04:34:00 pm
Don't shoot it down, I like your comic. Get some better backrounds and it'll be fine.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Red_Raven on December 12, 2005, 05:37:34 pm
Mine, plus I have a story planned out, the problem is telling it. Im workin on it, everythig will come together soon.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Red_Raven on December 12, 2005, 08:08:39 pm
Comic 4#
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Prox on December 12, 2005, 10:31:10 pm
Quote from: Vito on December 11, 2005, 04:51:45 pm
spell and grammar check
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Ciono on December 12, 2005, 10:40:11 pm
seconded
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Buzzard on December 13, 2005, 12:37:30 am
Were's me and Sino.

PS: thirded
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Red_Raven on December 13, 2005, 01:48:42 pm
Hang on, Im not at that part of the storyline yet.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Buzzard on December 13, 2005, 02:01:01 pm
s-sir, you need sprites for those kind of things. I have no sprites. unless you make your own.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Shadow on December 13, 2005, 03:30:10 pm
Same here
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Bluejay on December 13, 2005, 03:32:29 pm
Quote from: ecto on December 12, 2005, 04:34:00 pm
Don't shoot it down, I like your comic. Get some better backrounds and it'll be fine.
You mock my crappy backgrounds sir? *removes glove and slaps Ecto* you sir have impuned my honor, and I challenge you to a duel!
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Red_Raven on December 13, 2005, 03:51:44 pm
 :'( :'( :'(

your say my comic sucks?
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Prox on December 13, 2005, 06:00:56 pm
I don't know where you got that from. Bluejay was talking to Ecto.

Anyways, Deck's never going to get Ecto cleaned up if he doesn't move that mop at all!
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Armchair on December 13, 2005, 10:14:02 pm
I think you should:
A) Give sprite credit.
B) Find some different text style for your comics.
C) Check grammar and spelling.
D) Don't put words in people's mouths. Deck doesn't talk like that. Or does he.
E) is for edit! If you do ignore B, at least make the "baloon" (and I used the term loosely) tails point in the direction of the speakers.
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: IceTyger on December 14, 2005, 11:11:57 am
I'M NOT IN IT

IGNORE THE FACT THAT I POST LIKE, ONCE A DECADE
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: FyberOptic on December 14, 2005, 11:15:17 am
BACK TO THE COTTON MINE
Title: Re: Adventures of Fybertech
Post by: Buzzard on December 14, 2005, 11:56:50 am
ICE, BACK IN YOUR HOLE. NOW.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Goes up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 15, 2005, 01:41:55 pm
AnyWAY. I'm gonna do a 16-bit comic with my own sprites. Itll make my life a whole lot easier.

What goes up...Goes up?
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Goes up?
Post by: ecto on December 15, 2005, 01:54:34 pm
I kinda figured as soon as you changed your avatar a new comic would be in the works. Mysto, just stick to one thing.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Goes up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 16, 2005, 08:22:50 am
Heres the Banner
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Goes up?
Post by: Bluejay on December 16, 2005, 10:10:14 am
Welcome back to Bob and George.
Mysto... Stick with one idea.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Goes up?
Post by: MDude on December 16, 2005, 10:20:08 am
I think this one's kind of neat, but I miss undead big band Mysto. He was favorite so far.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Goes up?
Post by: ecto on December 16, 2005, 04:39:47 pm
NO MEGA MAN RE COLORS
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Goes up?
Post by: Armchair on December 16, 2005, 05:25:35 pm
Dear Acto the Ecto,
I do believe recolor is one word.
<3 Armature.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Goes up?
Post by: Buzzard on December 16, 2005, 07:05:58 pm
Dear Mysto,
Stop changing comics as fast as you change your name.
<3 Buzzard
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Armchair on December 16, 2005, 09:03:12 pm
I hate your text baloons.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 16, 2005, 09:07:32 pm
I HATE ME
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Buzzard on December 16, 2005, 09:56:05 pm
I HAVE EVERYTHING.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Armchair on December 16, 2005, 10:03:45 pm
Quote from: Buzzard on December 16, 2005, 09:56:05 pm
I HAVE EVERYTHING.

/me hangs hat, walks out.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 16, 2005, 10:50:10 pm
TOO BAD
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Prox on December 16, 2005, 11:17:31 pm
Don't quit your day job, Mysto.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Vito on December 16, 2005, 11:20:04 pm
Could you make the text tails close to the people's mouth? I mean look at Doctor Lights' in the second panel.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 17, 2005, 10:07:27 am
Yeah, ive been trying to fix that, im trying to see if theres a better balloon on the shape tools
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Bluejay on December 17, 2005, 11:16:01 am
Mysto... are you going to stick to this comic for more than 1 week?  Because honestly it's sort of..... well... frustrating, that you keep starting a comic, getting 3 coomics in, then quitting for no reasong other than a newer more random idea popped into your head.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 17, 2005, 12:49:18 pm
Well, im trying out a new type of word bubbles now.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 17, 2005, 03:06:35 pm
Lovin explosions
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Prox on December 17, 2005, 04:07:25 pm
Quote from: Prox on December 16, 2005, 11:17:31 pm
Don't quit your day job, Mysto.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: ecto on December 17, 2005, 04:41:36 pm
Seriously, stop copying Bob and George.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 17, 2005, 05:26:15 pm
READ
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Armchair on December 17, 2005, 05:33:42 pm
Well you see Mysto, if you are trying to entertain us, I think that gives us the right to tell you what we don't like (which doesn't entertain us if you will) so maybe you should not get so crazy about our "comments" or stop making a comic that we don't enjoy.

Also I didn't read all of your image.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 17, 2005, 05:48:25 pm
Wow, thats the most non-retarded thing ive ever heard you say.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: FyberOptic on December 17, 2005, 05:59:32 pm
WELP, one can't get better at anything unless they practice, so I hadn't had much complaint about any of the comics.  Doing something creative is better than doing nothing at all.  However, I do agree with the spelling and grammar check comments.  I've known a few folks who make comics with certain problems and use the excuse that they're only making the comics for themselves so it doesn't matter, and that's fine I guess, but working for better spelling and grammar benefits you as well as the comic.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Prox on December 17, 2005, 06:03:22 pm
Oh, I'll post comments like this anyways, you know, since I'm a Dutch-Bag™ and all.

So let's address the corrections.

The main problem with your comic is that it's pretty pointless, like Ecto said before. It's like, the only thing behind your comic is the fact that you want to make one. So far, your comic has nothing to do with your title. I wouldn't say you're actually COPYING Bob and George, but you use the same childish "jokes" and the same types of sprites, which are hella overused and unpopular.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: ecto on December 17, 2005, 06:09:17 pm
Ok Gameboy, Mysto calling people names as we give you constructive critisim isn't a good way to score forum points here. When we comment on your comic it's so that you take our advice and better yourself with it. Instead your having a tantrum like a three year old when we tell you to fix things, or you drop them and start something entirly new.You should take the time to listen to the forum members that have been here longer. Just some advice. We know the do's and don'ts of making sprite comics. Your comic isn't enjoyable. Mega Man recolors aren't entertaining. BE ORGINAL.Try editing your sprites to look like beleivable characters and actually take the time to work on a plot.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Prox on December 17, 2005, 06:20:24 pm
Please pick a response:

1) Throw a fit and make callow insults left and right
2) "Leave" the website, only to return 12 hours later.
3) Act indifferent, then change the comic, avatar, name, etc.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: ecto on December 17, 2005, 06:28:28 pm
Or, 4 create a new account at snipe hunt media and start the whole thing over again.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: ecto on December 17, 2005, 06:40:46 pm
Typical response when someones caught with dual accounts. I find that hard to believe. If you don't have solid proof your just making things worse for yourself. If you think were giving you a hard time now try it here and see how we respond. If then what your saying is true I take back what I said. Two accounts are stupid and childish.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 17, 2005, 06:41:56 pm
Quote from: ecto on December 17, 2005, 06:28:28 pm
Or, 4 create a new account at snipe hunt media and start the whole thing over again.

You mean Tahikoma, My sister/aka Cortanagal? what about her? I have no control over what she does on my computer

ops, edited to late
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 17, 2005, 06:54:27 pm
Quote from: ecto on December 17, 2005, 06:40:46 pm
Typical response when someones caught with dual accounts. I find that hard to believe. If you don't have solid proof your just making things worse for yourself. If you think were giving you a hard time now try it here and see how we respond. If then what your saying is true I take back what I said. Two accounts are stupid and childish.

There is no way to show Solid proof of me having a sister. Like none of you could ever prove you had siblings unless you were dumb enough to post a real life pic of them
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: ecto on December 17, 2005, 06:57:05 pm
Im done with you.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 17, 2005, 06:59:44 pm
Yeah, lets just drop the hole thing and get on with the comic and regular talk.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Prox on December 17, 2005, 08:21:07 pm
This argument will only recur if you continue the comic without changing anything, Mysto.

That is my final statement.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 17, 2005, 08:26:36 pm
Quote from: Prox on December 17, 2005, 06:03:22 pm
Oh, I'll post comments like this anyways, you know, since I'm a Dutch-Bag™ and all.

So let's address the corrections.

The main problem with your comic is that it's pretty pointless, like Ecto said before. It's like, the only thing behind your comic is the fact that you want to make one. So far, your comic has nothing to do with your title. I wouldn't say you're actually COPYING Bob and George, but you use the same childish "jokes" and the same types of sprites, which are hella overused and unpopular.

Ill admit the spelling needs work, On the comic im working on the introduction of the cast members or im gonna move right on to the storyline and introduce them from there. As for the Title, that does need to change. As for the childish jokes, Thats whats supposed to bring out the entertainment...I think.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: magus on December 17, 2005, 10:01:22 pm
He's right for a change.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Buzzard on December 17, 2005, 11:44:54 pm
Way to improve, man. That was totally the response one should give when he's criticized.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Vito on December 18, 2005, 12:30:40 am
Well, I think I'll come in and try to hamper the hatin'.

Okay first off, if you're going to criticize Mysto's comic give reasons, so he can learn and try and fix that if he chooses too. Don’t just go YOU SUCK! Try and help, and not be an ass about it.

Now Mysto, I’m going to give you some suggestions and tell you how I generally make a comic, so I can help you. I use MSPaint and MicrosoftWord, I know you have a Mac so you probably don’t have those, but you probably have some sort of similar programs.
Some suggestions:
Sprites. Use your own, and try to avoid recolors.  Use your own sprites and characters because it makes things easier on you because that way your comic will keep the same style and you don’t have to worry about people getting angry about thievery. Avoid recolors because they’re lame and too simple. If you need to refine your spriting ability until you’re at a level above straight up recolors.

Story. First off stick with a comic for a while. Come up with a story that has a beginning, middle, and end in your mind, don’t worry about length. I originally only thought this Hindsight story would take like 25 comics to tell, then 50, and now it’s going to end on 100. I didn’t plan to get that far, I just thought of some stuff I wanted and made it work. Originally I had the story to be like Annie hires Vito, Vito goes to a bar to get info, Vito goes after Smartpig, Vito and Smartpig meet and fight or something. The end. From there I would add things to get the why and how one event would go to the next and sometimes even adding in some things that I thought would be cool, like Annie gets kidnapped. The main thing is I wanted it to make sense so people wouldn’t have to ask questions, or that those questions would be answered in a future comic. So come up with a story and setting that will make it so people won’t have to ask questions. Generally, having the first comic kind of telling the setting and introducing characters is a good idea. That’s what I did.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 21, 2005, 01:52:23 pm
Well, I guess I'm heading back to the fybertech comic. Jeff recommended it and plus did an awsome job on the sprite of my black and white guy. That comic in gereral was alot better then the megaman recolors one. Plus I found and 8-bit font to use with a better bubble. Thanks for the help Vito, Jeff/Takato and everyone else thats helped me out.

So expect some improvements people.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: ecto on December 21, 2005, 02:29:49 pm
How long is this going to last Mysto two days?
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Sino on December 21, 2005, 02:31:51 pm
Ecto, shut the hell up. I know as well as you that this may not last forever, but you don't have to make it last two days just by saying "U SUK".
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Buzzard on December 21, 2005, 02:59:42 pm
HEAR HEAR! But really, encouragement makes things last longer than insults. If you guys want him to stick to a comic, give him constructive criticism, and don't make it sound too harsh.
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Red_Raven on December 21, 2005, 06:35:18 pm
Thanks buzzard.

plus  heres the sprite jeff made for me ^.^
Title: Re: What Goes Up...Stays up?
Post by: Ciono on December 22, 2005, 01:01:36 am
Quote from: Buzzard on December 21, 2005, 02:59:42 pm
HEAR HEAR! But really, encouragement makes things last longer than insults. If you guys want him to stick to a comic, give him constructive criticism, and don't make it sound too harsh.

I agree, but the last time we tried encouraging him, and offering criticism, he told us we were intitled to our opinions and did what he wanted.

Anyway, Mysto, pick an idea and stick with it. If you can't decide, sit down and think out exactly how many comics you think you can make in each vein. Whichever one you think is better should be the one you choose. Then you need to stick with it and keep improving.
Title: Re: Mysto Comics
Post by: ahnna on October 12, 2006, 01:24:22 pm
you're comic old
Title: Re: Mysto Comics
Post by: Blazeman on October 12, 2006, 09:18:39 pm
Plx miss Ahnna why you bump?
Title: Re: Mysto Comics
Post by: ahnna on November 04, 2006, 12:28:05 pm
Quote from: Blazeman on October 12, 2006, 09:18:39 pm
Plx miss Ahnna why you bump?

not bump
Title: Re: Mysto Comics
Post by: Blazeman on November 06, 2006, 11:02:00 am
Topic ten months old before bump...
Title: Re: Mysto Comics
Post by: ahnna on November 06, 2006, 11:06:20 am
huh
Title: Re: Mysto Comics
Post by: Sino on November 06, 2006, 11:11:09 pm
Whoa, Blaze, don't do what got you kicked out of Snipe-Hunt again.